Creative Writing

Review of Tim Bryant’s The Stained Glass Mustang

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Tim Bryant’s new novel, The Stained Glass Mustang, is a captivating tale of wrong actions leading to unimaginable loss and the bumpy road to redemption. The accident happens, irreversibly, in an alcohol-blurred moment. From there we’re with the guilty driver John, a once successful PR and marketing specialist, as he struggles to reconcile his old life with the new, disgraced version of himself. The contest unfolds against vivid imagery of Charleston and surrounding areas, a place Bryant knows well, using threads of various colors to weave a tapestry of light and shadow, good and evil, and multifaceted love when viewed from a distance.

At the heart of the Charleston descriptions are the rivers, Ashley and Cooper, whose confluence form Charleston Harbor. John’s world, before the tragedy, was on the swanky, upmarket Ashley side. Now that he’s “bankrupt in all ways: money . . . love . . . soul,” he has been reassigned by fate to the Cooper marina, “where there would be no more full-service amenities.” John once owned a sleek yacht that he docked at the Ashley Marina. Now he lives aboard his ketch, docked in murky water where at low tide there’s a stench in the air along with the constant din of nearby workers welding and banging to repair old cargo ships. He once drove a freshly waxed company-leased Range Rover. Now his battered old pickup sits in the gravel parking lot of the low-rent Marina.  

His wife Cathy has divorced him, and his daughter Janelle will have nothing to do with her dishonored dad, unwilling to reach through the dark cloud that surrounds him. In order to feed himself and pay for his slip at the marina, he is forced to write press releases and internet promotions for a lecherous shyster named Big Al, the only client he can secure at this low point. Big Al is demanding, and John finds himself increasingly at his beck and call. This unsavory relationship adds to John’s burden of guilt and depression.

This story rides along dark currents, but comic relief abounds. Big Al and his “team” are the source of many chuckles. His business is discount auto parts and accessories, most of them cheap Chinese knockoffs. John’s role as Al’s marketing specialist, becomes complicated when John inherits an elaborately painted Mustang from his father, from whom he has been estranged for years. The car’s paint job, inexplicably layered in vibrant colors in the style of the Mexican muralist movement, is “now covered in Chicano street art, scenes from church windows, a graffiti-like rendition of the life of Jesus: Da Vinci’s The Last Supper, Michaelangelo’s The Creation of Adam, Raphael’s The Transfiguration, and Jacapo Pontormo’s The Deposition from the Cross. These and more as if in a Mexican barrio—bright, ostentatious, mystical.” When Big Al sees the car, he is awestruck, and the wheels of his diabolical mind begin to spin.

He offers to pay John handsomely for the use of the grandiose vehicle as an attraction at Race-O-Rama, a local track that serves as a poor man’s training ground for NASCAR wannabes whose race cars are held together with baling wire and Big Al’s cheap parts. The spectators include unsavory characters from the bottom rungs of the socio-economic ladder, along with many folk of Hispanic origins, the perfect audience for the resplendent and spiritually imbued Mustang.

Despondent John reluctantly does Big Al’s bidding, hawking his inferior merchandise to the crowds that are drawn to the enigmatic allure of the Mustang with all its religious symbolism. As a profitable pattern begins to develop, John meets Maria, a beautiful Hispanic woman who seems out of place at Race-O-Rama. Weeks roll by and the car becomes a legend. Money rolls in, but slowly, through his association with Maria, John’s perspective begins a radical realignment.

The heart of this book is, indeed, Bryant’s captivatingly nuanced portrayal of Maria, and the obstacle-filled unfolding of John’s relationship with her.

Maria despises Big Al and his duplicitous marketing ploys. She is an artistic, spiritual woman dedicated to good deeds, and wise beyond her years. What begins as an unlikely friendship blossoms into a love story wherein John realizes he must change his ways in order to be worthy of Maria’s affection. She encourages him, pointing out the obvious in a way that allows him to see the fault lines of his crumbling life, and she also sees the spiritual significance of the Mustang and the immoral way in which Big Al and John are profiting from its misuse. The heart of this book is, indeed, Bryant’s captivatingly nuanced portrayal of Maria, and the obstacle-filled unfolding of John’s relationship with her.

With its passionate heart, the story’s propulsion—the wind in its sails—comes via wind in the sails. John loves sailing, and Tim Bryant displays both his writing chops and knowledge when he writes about the subject. This passage describes the experience of John’s friend Richard the first time John takes him out for a lesson:

“He [cut the engine] and then the magic happened as it always does for newbies, the obnoxious motor racket suddenly replaced by a bewitching rush of sensations: sounds of water rushing along the hull, water gurgling off the rudder, lines straining, basket of fruit hanging in the galley creak-creak-creaking back and forth, back and forth, full sails filling the sky, breezes brushing his face silk-like, sea and sky combined into an enormous tranquility mesmerizing Richard, changing his life forever.”

As Richard’s perspective changes through sailing, John’s spirit becomes reinvigorated as he realizes anew life’s beauty, endless potential, and his sense of purpose. His friendships deepen as does his relationship with Maria and her young son. When he meets his ex-wife Cathy for dinner to discuss, among other things, their daughter, who is now estranged from both of them, she offers a pearl of encouragement to the man she once loved, before the unspeakable tragedy that broke their lives apart: “I think there’s a lot still out there waiting for you to find it.”

John has sailed across dark currents that nearly capsized him, but he is still upright, heading into a new life with his compass pointed toward love and forgiveness. In this complex novel Bryant has employed a range of outcomes, symbols, and correlatives, along with a rich cast of characters, to show how bleak circumstances and myriad setbacks can work together for good. The reader, having embarked on this journey with John, will be uplifted and satisfied when it comes to an end, but nevertheless wanting more—not because anything is lacking but because it is that good.

Creative Writing

Revelations from the Lowcountry: A Review of Tim Bryant’s THE BIRD IN YOUR HEART

Tim Bryant’s recently released novel, The Bird in Your Heart, is a beautifully conceived and tightly woven chronicle of the geography, traditions, and superstitions of the South Carolina Lowcountry; generational expectations; family; friendship; racial barriers and bridges; good whiskey; the persistent lure of sailing across the open sea; and the therapeutic value of bird watching. If you’re thinking that’s a lot, you’re right, but that ain’t all. Included also are a mysteriously missing father, divorce, wedding, Gullah mysticisms, a sweet-running Jaguar automobile, a battered Land Rover, spoiled rich people, a beautiful sailboat, an epic storm, an explosion and fire, and a just-right dose of romantic love. One may ask how Bryant pulls it all off. I’m not sure, but I suspect Lowcountry magic . . . or there’s the more likely explanation that his success is due to masterful craftsmanship.  

The art of weaving together various plot points, scenes, and characters requires talent and an overriding desire to get things right. Because Tim Bryant possesses these traits in abundance, the reader glides easily through the chapters, eager to see what happens next, even though the novel doesn’t rely on cheap suspense and cliffhangers. It’s all in the balance: Bryant in this regard matches the best of the plate-spinning, sword juggling, unicycle riders of the literary world. Jane Smiley, Jodi Picoult, and Richard Russo come to mind. I’m sure you can think of your own favorite authors who can explore several narrative arcs in the same novel without the book becoming too plot heavy.  

Plate spinning and juggling require a solid foundation on which to distribute the weight. This is where careful scene construction comes into play. Consider this description of an Edisto Island landmark, Rupert Wright’s bait shop:

. . . I could see him as he always was: on the porch of his bait shop . . . rocking in his   chair, looking to be asleep, but not. He was as black and hard as coal and his hair was like the white ash that appears when coal begins to heat up. I always thought of him as the oldest person alive because his appearance made it seem so. Yet . . . he never seemed to age further. . . . Visiting Rupert’s store was a fork in the road decision, with consequences large and small. . . . You had to willingly surrender the reassurances of good, county-ordained pavement to accept the consequences of loose gravel over oyster shells and sand. A right-hand turn then another then another, then a left and another right. Woods . . . mudflats . . .   scrublands . . . not much else. At about the time you’re uneasy enough to consider turning back, Rupert’s hand-painted signs appear at intervals along the way, announcing “ICE COLD GRAPE SODA!” “POTTED MEAT!” and “Worms and Crickets Just Ahead!” as if tidings of great joy. Then it hits you that you’re in deep, deeper than you’ll ever know.  

Rupert and his disheveled store—replete with fishing gear, canned potted meat, soft drinks, boiled peanuts, yams from the garden, comic books, toilet paper, and most anything else a person in that neck of the woods might need—figures heavily in the novel as a place of insight, point of reference, an avenue for comfort, and sanctuary for clear thinking.

Jack Hamilton, the novel’s protagonist and narrator, has been away from Edisto for a long time. Upon his first trip back to Rupert’s store, he’s filled with waves of nostalgia. He has escaped a bad marriage to a spoiled rich girl and an unsatisfying seven years of serving as a senior executive in her father’s ad agency. Now he’s leaving Atlanta behind, the posh Buckhead apartment and his precarious perch among Atlanta’s elite society. He is ready for a fresh start and finally to embark on his lifelong dream of sailing the open seas.

He arrives back in Edisto, where he grew up, to find that some things have changed while others have not. The birds are still there. In fact the novel opens with a Boat-Tailed Grackle flying high over the island, “above marshlands and swamps, across small struggling farms, and narrow, rough-edged roads disappearing between old oaks. It swooped in low for a closer look at tidy white cottages where clothes hung on lines like dots and dashes . . . and then soared farther out to where the few old plantation homes remained, some freshly painted, others desecrated by the seasons: from airless summer heat to shivery winter drafts and, in between, salty storms blowing in from the sea.”

The grounds and old plantation house where he’d grown up were largely the same, at least to the casual observer, but Jack soon discovered, after an uncharacteristic plea for help from his mother, that the old place was “falling down” around her. The mother’s health, particularly her vision, was also in decline. Jack wasn’t prepared for this. He needed a place for rest and quiet reflection as he envisioned the sailboat he’d buy with the settlement money from the divorce and severance from his father-in-law’s firm. He’d been paid a considerable sum to basically go away, and that’s what he’d planned to do, still planned to do until he received another round of bad news from his mother’s banker: her money was all gone. Now Jack’s dreams were in jeopardy. Would he “man up” and do the right thing, or would his selfish desires get the better of him.

In making choices for his mother and himself, Jack becomes torn and entangled. The realization that the path to freedom will not be found entirely through his own efforts but through the surprising behavior of those he loves—along with some unexpected twists of fate—comes hard. Will the nagging questions of his childhood be resolved? Will his hopes and dreams—at least some of them—be realized? In reading The Bird in Your Heart, you’ll accompany Jack on this rewarding ride through misadventures, false starts, and revelations. Bonuses include learning about Lowcountry life, bird watching, and perhaps a thing or two about yourself.   

Here’s the link: https://www.amazon.com/Bird-Your-Heart-Tim-Bryant/dp/B0C1J3FG33/ref=sr_1_1?crid=1D4GFZWCQHATX&keywords=the+bird+in+your+heart&qid=1704994376&s=books&sprefix=The+Bird+in+Your+Hea%2Cstripbooks%2C747&sr=1-1